The Challenge: Write a short story that entails both romance and mystery. The primary scene must take place at a bus station. The lead character is a female going home from work. As she steps off her bus, her scarf got caught by the wind and landed on the ground a few feet away. While retrieving her scarf, she noticed a small piece of fortune cookie paper that reads: "Judge not by appearance, but by character." Upon looking up, she saw a gentleman in professional attire and suitcase holding onto a boy of approximately 7-year-old. In contrast, the boy was dressed in rags and covered in dirt. Tell a tale of how these three characters interact as our female lead follows the advice of her fortune.

The Criteria: Originality. Unique writing style. Clarity of thought. Proper grammar.

Five contestants entered the writing challenge and were determined to see the finish line before midnight of March 2nd, 2010. Despite the little time afforded, the entries excel in originality and am in awe with everyone's effort. The deadline dawned upon us before we know it. Vivien puts it best when she stated that she has "never felt this rushed even in school." Indeed, the challenge pushed everyone to strive for a goal that perhaps I myself would have given up on. But our five participants persevered. Of notable mentions are krystal and TVBInteraction who composed their very first fanfictions for the challenge. And let me tell you, my very first fanfic pales in comparison. In fact, it's a memory I'd rather bury. You know, the better forgotten past, to quote krystal. ;)


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"Timely Connections", written by krystal, explores the themes of betrayal, acceptance and forgiveness within the past, present and future. The complexity of her plot definitely requires more than a mere three days to execute and am happy to know krystal will re-visit this fiction to further develop it. The story already has a very solid outline with an intriguing beginning and conclusion. And as an avid reader, I'd love to know more of: (1) the bond between Tavia and Sheren during their poorer days and the care that Sheren showered Tavia with, (2) Sheren's reaction and subsequent forgiveness when she was informed of Tavia's betrayal and (3) the romantic relationship that forms between Tavia and Kevin and how he changed her materialistic ways. But even without a further exploration of the three subplots I highlighted above, krystal's 3-day work already exceeds one's expectation for a fanfic writer's debut. ;)


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"Deceiving Assumptions", written by TVBInteraction, tells a tale of strong-headed Macy who steered clear from men. But one day, her 'single principle' was unknowingly challenged by Him Law. Him, despite developing a crush on Macy during their college days, never got the guts to tell her. Macy, who never once noticed him in college, thought her new colleague's a rascal just like the other men she interacted with. But through their work rapport, Macy realized she must acknowledge the exception to the rule. In the (promised) revision, I hope to see more of Macy's interactions with Him and how he managed to shake her firm belief. Furthermore, the story's synopsis asked "what will happen next" when Macy falls for Him. Indeed, readers are awaiting answers. ;) Again, a greatly commendable first effort and I hope your pen will never stop writing, Iris. :)


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Perhaps the only entry that truly delved into the Mystery genre, Vivien wrote "Valentino" with an unexpected twist. [Can I afford a little aside? I love the names Colette and Alexia! *TkN quickly adds to her list of potential baby names list*] My only recommendation for her planned lengthier version of the fiction is to explore the character Valentino and give him layers. Of course, I enjoyed the mysterious air that Valentino carries with his little words and unexplained actions. However, he seems to have taken the backseat and let Colette drive the story forward despite the fiction being named after him. The intriguing introduction defined the name Valentino as one with determination and hinted love. Regrettably, both defining characteristics were not thoroughly explored. I can sense his determination, but it lacks a strong motive. I was never certain who he was in love with. These are two areas in which I hope can come to light in the long version. But for a day's work, this is stunning. I greatly appreciate the engrossing plot and circular narrative that nicely concludes the story.


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A very fitting paradoxical title! "Advancing Backwards", by flo, explores the themes of change as Nathan struggles with self-improvement and adaptation when Hayley realizes she has lacunar amnesia. Bonded by a seven-year-old, the two embarked on a journey of self-discovery. flo did a wonderful job with describing settings and actions. The tangible tension she created between Hayley and Nathan so intense that I found myself drawing bated breaths when the scene closes. I strongly encourage flo to continue this fiction as it concludes with many questions left unanswered. I felt teased. :P Lead readers into the memories that Hayley slowly recovers. Let readers become more acquainted with Nathan as Hayley further interacts with him. Paint for us the future they will have as they deal with their darker past and the concept of parenthood. As Nathan spoke, "Consider it." No, demand! I want to read more! :D Again, a job very well done! A wonderful balance between intensity and light-heartedness (re: Tessa).


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I have never before fallen in love with a character that was introduced to me in a mere twelve pages. But I have now. Not for his mysterious aura, expressive eyes, or expensive suit. But for the wit, sensibility, and kindness he exemplifies. And let's not forget our feisty and righteous heroine who is equally kind. Portraying such charming characters with so few words is no easy task. But someday, glazed-over will get things right. Well, that someday is today! glazed-over's simple yet effective short fiction wins this challenge. Her incorporation of the challenge's requirements and themes seemed effortless, and with added humor. The motto "judge not by appearance, but by character" was beautifully intertwined throughout the narration. glazed-over also has a strong command for English and her descriptors poignant, persuasive. The scope of her plot carefully planned and thoroughly explored, despite the short time she was allowed to work on her story. My heart, soul, and mind unequivocally recommend this fiction! In fact, check out other works from glazed-over at http://tvbcentral.net/fanfic/viewuser.php?action=storiesby&uid=9

My sincere gratitude, once more, to everyone who participated in the challenge! Your hard work was incredibly inspiring. Your determination held me speechless. And I hope this spirit never fades, as our second challenge will be issued soon-ish, to quote glazed-over. :) Indeed, our challenge winner will be in charge of hosting the next challenge. Keep an eye out for it! :)